[Note to followers: The first time I tried to post this story, the text blocks got all screwed up. One of Santa’s naughty elves I think or perhaps it was the eggnog! At any rate HAPPY HOLIDAYS!]
The year the Hong Kong flu swept across America killing thousands of people and leaving others begging for death, I was a “Christmas Helper” assigned to the home goods department of a Macy’s in downtown Kansas City Missouri. If you’ve ever taken a seasonal job selling products that you know nothing about then you’ll understand why I spent most of my time in the stock room. No one ever found anything in the stock room and so I could sit in there forever wondering why anyone would want a tangerine colored crockpot.
The store was located not far from the abandoned stockyards in an area where few businesses still survived but I was just a teenager with no resume. And so I’d quickly and without thinking taken a minimum wage job an hour by bus from Greenwood Missouri where I lived with a friend a few years older and much wiser than me.
Her name was Joellen and she was more than a friend. She was the big sister I’d never had.
Her life had been hard. Her father, an alcoholic, had committed suicide when she was fourteen and the man her mother soon remarried didn’t like children. Especially Joellen who was probably smarter than him and not afraid to speak her mind. She survived by hiring herself out as a nanny in exchange for room and board. We were really lucky when she picked our family.
Not long after Joellen graduated from college she married a man in the National Guard. She’d followed him on his first deployment to Missouri where, thinking they would be settled for a while, she’d enrolled in graduate school. However, he was redeployed, this time overseas, leaving her stuck in a town on the outskirts of Kansas City.
For a gal from Reno Nevada, this was akin to being stuck on Mars. Reno is an all-night, pay-to-play, everything goes town with a marque reading “Biggest Little City in the World.” The sign outside of Greenwood Missouri read:
WELCOME TO GREENWOOD
✞ HAVE YOU BEEN SAVED✞
After high school, my first attempt to voyage out into the world had ended in a Mennonite cornfield with one friend hospitalized, the other pregnant, and me with a fork stuck in my leg. I’d returned home to Reno hardly the Prodigal Child. My parents were going through a divorce, all my friends were in college or getting married prematurely to boys I knew would never be men. My chances to succeed seemed slim to none and then Joellen wrote:
”Come live with me and get your act together.”
She had more faith in me than I did.
We soon became known in Greenwood (population 800) as “dem dam hippies.” I guess because we drove an old VW bug and lived in a three room shack with little insulation, leaky windows and a wall heater that barely kept the place warm. When the temps dropped below freezing, we pulled the VW into an attached lean-to, however, in order to keep the engine block from freezing, we had to run an extension cord out to a lamp underneath the hood. It didn’t always work.
Every morning I drove with Joellen to the campus of the University of Missouri, Kansas City (UMKC) then took a bus down to Macys. I can still remember the long hours I spent in that windowless building pretending I had any idea whatsoever about what I was doing. The only thing that made the job bearable was a cheerful black girl, not much older than me, who could talk customers into buying products off the shelves so she did not need to enter the dreaded stockroom.
Five days before Christmas my body began to ache. The bars, barbecue joints, and Victorian boarding houses along the route back to the campus were decorated for the season with blinking lights and Santa Clauses but in my worsening condition they were as sinister as ghouls in a carnival funhouse.
I remember seeing my reflection in the window on those dark, cold nights. Instead of eighteen I looked eighty (or as my mother would say like “death warmed over”)
I cried as I waited for Joellen outside her class. All around were murals Thomas Hart Benton had painted in his lean and feverish years, scenes of farm life that felt so cold and lifeless I decided he must have hated the Midwest.
I tried to convince myself that a good night’s sleep was all I needed, but deep down I knew, it was the Hong Kong flu.
20 thoughts on “Shalee’s Christmas Story (redux)”
Hi. I forget what my comments were when I replied to the version of this that you published yesterday. In any case, all the best to you and yours.
Thank you Neil. All the best to you and your family as well.
What a ride, J. And? What was it like? I hope there’s more to come. I’d really like to know.
Btw, who’s Shalee?
A young lady who’s had a rough way to go.
Have the best Christmas you possibly can 💜💜💜
Thank you Willow! I’ve been taking it easy, drinking a nice glass of wine and nibbling on a lovely cheese! Very pleasant indeed.
Excellent 💜 and keeping warm I hope 💜
Merry Christmas, Jan. I look forward to reading more of this story if you choose to post it. XXO
Thanks Mary. Hope you and your family are having a lovely day.
Helluva way to grow, huh? Merry crimbo
I definitely picked the hard road during my reckless youth. Ah well, it’s left me with an appreciation for what is really important.
Well, Xmas is over and my uncle is still alive, still in a coma. He could afford all the very best. We shall see. Now about this story … there is a very touching thread running through it, a description of life that many of us can identify with. This particular piece of writing is one of your best. Seriously. The words were walking and talking, appropriately dressed, making note of all the details and larger themes of life. It worked on many levels and you have hit what I consider the most important … authenticity and style. This story had a face and a past and a future. As I reader, I can’t ask for much more. It was funny too. Thanks. Duke
That’s Duke. At least your uncle didn’t die on Christmas – that can be rough. Ice storms are frightening but, if you survive, the aftermath is stunning – like living in a world of prisms.
Loved it, both parts 1 and 2. I was a damn hippie too. Funny how we were the biggest threat to our country back then, although Spiro Agnew did his share.
Hey Jan, glad to see you got this story posted by Christmas eve for others to enjoy. It reminds me of reading a chapter of Dickens’ “A Christmas Story” every day before being set free for the holidays, back when we all worked together at TFS in Berkeley. Layton’s idea of course. It was difficult for you and some of the others to join bc admin support folk were not allowed to roam as free as uppity programmers and their tolerated writers. I have a picture of some of us laying about on the floor of that “big office” on Milvia. Layton, Judith, Jeanne Harte, Schip, Greg… who else? If I can just get in into that back closet and into the picture box, I will try to resurrect and share a photo soon.
I like all of your Joellen-inspired stories. And I love the art work you chose here, esp the farming scene! Wow!
Neat story! I read it backwards, and it was a good read.
Thanks … I’m glad you enjoyed it!